User contributions for 109.79.165.50

12 January 2021

• 16:4516:45, 12 January 2021 diff hist −12‎ Blade: Trinity ‎ Copyedit. Brevity.
• 16:4416:44, 12 January 2021 diff hist −59‎ Blade: Trinity ‎ Goyer wikilinked plenty of times already. Dont insert new information in front of sources that don't support it. That Variety reference is only about Hirschbiegel. Tag: Undo
• 16:3216:32, 12 January 2021 diff hist −17‎ Sense and Sensibility (film) ‎ WP:FILMLEAD " If the nationality is not singular, cover the different national interests later" Undid revision 997936217 by 2603:8000:8503:B49:D08D:149C:F7E2:EBE5 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 16:2216:22, 12 January 2021 diff hist +597‎ Talk:Bo-Katan Kryze ‎ →‎images: new section
• 15:5315:53, 12 January 2021 diff hist −4‎ Chapter 11: The Heiress ‎ Remove wikilink/redlink Maria Sandoval
• 15:4315:43, 12 January 2021 diff hist +677‎ Chapter 11: The Heiress ‎ Koska Reeves distinctive cross braid hairstyle was created by stylist Maria Sandoval
• 15:2815:28, 12 January 2021 diff hist −42‎ Transformers: Age of Extinction ‎ Warning comment was ignored again "WP:FILMLEDE All claims must be clearly supported by the Critical response section." Undid revision 999901711 by 68.199.138.106 (talk) Tag: Undo
• 15:2615:26, 12 January 2021 diff hist −9‎ The Peanuts Movie ‎ Copyedit. Streamline.
• 15:2215:22, 12 January 2021 diff hist −15‎ Boba Fett ‎ Remove unsourced "fans alike" claim, which is almost always unprovable. Rephrase "acclaim" to "positive reviews", great claims require great evidence, no evidence so far.
• 15:0715:07, 12 January 2021 diff hist +143‎ Wall Street: Money Never Sleeps ‎ Fix reference that was missing URL. FIx lists too.
• 15:0315:03, 12 January 2021 diff hist +13‎ Wall Street: Money Never Sleeps ‎ →‎Reception: dead link
• 15:0115:01, 12 January 2021 diff hist −10‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ MOS:SMALLFONT Avoid using smaller font sizes in elements that already use a smaller font size, such as infoboxes
• 15:0115:01, 12 January 2021 diff hist +1‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Template:Good article "This template should be placed at the bottom of the article before defaultsort, categories and interwikis."
• 15:0015:00, 12 January 2021 diff hist +21‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Fix dead link. Ebert.
• 14:5714:57, 12 January 2021 diff hist +35‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Fix dead link. Variety.
• 14:5514:55, 12 January 2021 diff hist −2‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Dead links.
• 14:5414:54, 12 January 2021 diff hist +14‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Avoid site specific jargon. A metascore is merely a score from Metacritic
• 14:5314:53, 12 January 2021 diff hist +36‎ Wall Street (1987 film) ‎ Archived copy is a bad citation title, improve reference. See Category:CS1 maint: archived copy as title
• 14:3614:36, 12 January 2021 diff hist −2‎ Chapter 13: The Jedi ‎ Standard? MOS:TVRECEPTION does not provide a specific wording. This change was inconsistent with the other seven episodes of Season 2. (Also despite the widespread failure to get this grammatically right it should either be review aggregator RT or review aggregation website RT. Think _tax collector_ versus _tax collection_.) Undid revision 999851902 Tags: Undo Reverted
• 14:3114:31, 12 January 2021 diff hist −90‎ Fantastic Beasts: The Secrets of Dumbledore ‎ MOS:STRAIGHT
• 14:2914:29, 12 January 2021 diff hist −33‎ Fantastic Beasts: The Secrets of Dumbledore ‎ Copyedit. Revert. Means the same thing, no need to make it complicated.
• 14:2514:25, 12 January 2021 diff hist +2‎ Fantastic Beasts and Where to Find Them (film) ‎ Copyedit.
• 14:1714:17, 12 January 2021 diff hist +131‎ Bo-Katan Kryze ‎ Image of Katee Sackhoff
• 14:1414:14, 12 January 2021 diff hist +1,008‎ Bo-Katan Kryze ‎ The Mandalorian plot. (Also must mention the Darksaber in Clone Wars episodes as it ties the stories together.)
• 13:4813:48, 12 January 2021 diff hist +106‎ Bo-Katan Kryze ‎ Breakuphugerunonsentencewhichisnotnicetoread. Three episodes worth, could probably include a bit more detail.
• 08:2508:25, 12 January 2021 diff hist +323‎ Wild Hogs ‎ Not just Travolta but also new management at Disney Rich Ross nixed many films
• 08:1808:18, 12 January 2021 diff hist +864‎ Transformers: Revenge of the Fallen ‎ The reputation of the publication doesn't invalidate the reputation Robbie Collin one of the top British film critics. Undid revision 999081965 by Robby.is.on (talk) Tags: Undo Reverted use of deprecated (unreliable) source
• 08:1208:12, 12 January 2021 diff hist +1,064‎ User talk:109.76.214.105 ‎ Unwarranted warning from bullying editor who doesn't understand WP:PROSE. current
• 08:0008:00, 12 January 2021 diff hist +1,538‎ Talk:Chapter 16: The Rescue ‎ WP:LOCALCONSENSUS
• 07:3507:35, 12 January 2021 diff hist −2‎ Chapter 13: The Jedi ‎ Copyedit. Tag: Reverted
• 07:3207:32, 12 January 2021 diff hist +4‎ Chapter 12: The Siege ‎ Copyedit. Keep it simple. pilfer is not as clear as steal.
• 07:3107:31, 12 January 2021 diff hist −230‎ Chapter 11: The Heiress ‎ Revert. Warning comment ignored: MOS:TVPLOT 400 words or less. Also replacing "the Mandalorian" with Djarin not consistent with other articles. Tag: Undo
• 07:2907:29, 12 January 2021 diff hist −567‎ Chapter 10: The Passenger ‎ Revert. Warning comment ignored: MOS:TVPLOT 400 words or less. Also replacing "the Mandalorian" with Djarin not consistent with other articles. Tag: Undo
• 07:2707:27, 12 January 2021 diff hist −103‎ Chapter 9: The Marshal ‎ →‎Plot: Reverts. Consistent with other articles in the series we write "the Mandalorian" not Djarin. There's no need to call the Tuskens savages. Keep it simple. Again "the Mandalorian" not Djarin. MOS:AMP dont use ampersands. (We don't really know from the episode that the pearl is valuable but to claim it is priceless requires knowledge from the Expanded Universe, too much.)
• 07:1707:17, 12 January 2021 diff hist −5,046‎ Cat's Eye (1985 film) ‎ Revert. Plot is tagged as too Long. You need to make it shorter not longer. Tag: Undo
• 07:1007:10, 12 January 2021 diff hist +328‎ Thumbelina (1994 film) ‎ Review from James Berardinelli
• 07:0507:05, 12 January 2021 diff hist −216‎ Thumbelina (1994 film) ‎ Fix dead link. Variety.
• 06:5806:58, 12 January 2021 diff hist +7‎ Thumbelina (1994 film) ‎ Fix dead link. Ebert.
• 06:5406:54, 12 January 2021 diff hist −39‎ Thumbelina (1994 film) ‎ Dead link. WP:ELDUP
• 06:4906:49, 12 January 2021 diff hist +235‎ Million Dollar Baby ‎ →‎Critical response: Citations needed. Reviews should not be included without sources.