Wikipedia talk:Today's featured article/September 19, 2009

First sentence[edit]

The first sentence here needs to be totally rewritten. "economy" needs an definite article, "the economy", but it was the period, not the economy, that "saw" China experience prosperity and decline. Awien (talk) 12:29, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Here's one suggestion/starting point:

The Economy of the Han Dynasty of ancient China reflects a period of fluctuation between periods of prosperity and decline. Awien (talk) 13:19, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Your suggestion seems quite reasonable, so I have done it. — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 17:09, 18 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

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"Economy" should be lowercased. Gary King (talk) 04:03, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Already fixed, thanks. — Martin (MSGJ · talk) 09:35, 19 September 2009 (UTC)[reply]