Wikipedia:Peer review/Big Brother Australia/archive1

Big Brother (Australia)[edit]

Wikipedia:Peer review/Big Brother (Australian TV series)/archive1

I've been thinking about doing this for a while, and I know it's hell unlikely that the article is able to pass an FA nomination. I'm not aiming for that, but the Big Brother Australia articles don't get as much attention as the other articles and it would be great if more editors could comment on this one, so that it can be improved. jd || talk || 12:21, 2 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Just a note on the prior peer review for potential reviewers. Since the last review, this article has undergone a split into separate articles for each series. The previous review covered all series rolled into one article. -- Longhair\^talk 10:13, 3 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Looking good. First problem is the first heading looks a bit odd in between the TOC and the infobox - I suggest get rid off it, and cut down the leading section a little. There are quite a lot of small sections which could probably be merged, and also more pictures culd help separate the large chunks of text. There are quite a few lists, which create whitespace, so perhaps they could be organised differently. Thanks. --Alex (Talk) 14:55, 6 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, Ruhrfisch 15:49, 17 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]