Wikipedia:WikiProject Military history/Assessment/Koli Point action

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Koli Point action[edit]

Respectfully submit this article on a Pacific War battle for A-class review. Cla68 (talk) 07:36, 28 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support. Cla68 comes through again with an excellent Pacific War battle article. As I said a short time ago about the Matanikau Offensive article, this article as well represents a good balance between focusing on the US/Allied and Japanese aspects of the conflict, and is written in an objective (NPOV) and professional manner. Keep up the good work. LordAmeth (talk) 22:30, 28 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support I am with his Lordship on this one. Well written, well done. Woody (talk) 13:18, 29 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Nicely done. --Eurocopter tigre (talk) 17:44, 29 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support. Small point: U.S. has points, CAF doesn't. Consistency? --ROGER DAVIES ^talk 18:58, 31 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good point. It needs to be consistent. Cla68 (talk) 23:35, 31 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Support Its all been said. TomStar81 (Talk) 23:28, 31 January 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Support Another great article. As a comment, I doubt that "U.S. Navy cruisers Helena, San Francisco, and destroyer Sterett bombarded Shōji's positions with cannon fire" - 'artillery fire' would be a better term (unless the ships used their 20mm automatic cannons in which case 'heavy machine gun fire' would possibly be the clearest term). --Nick Dowling (talk) 11:00, 1 February 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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