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ShanghaiTech University[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because I believe it should be re-evaluated from stub to a higher rating. Also I'd like to receive comments on how I can improve the article. I have a COI (I am a Professor at ShanghaiTech)...

Thanks, Blaklumm (talk) 06:10, 28 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I've re-assessed the article to class C. It will need better referencing to be upgraded further. Thanks for improving the article! -Zanhe (talk) 08:23, 11 July 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Some comments:

Not a fan of several references and lists in the intro: see if university affiliations can be worked into a separate section or integrated with the body. Definitely move each reference to immediately follow the affiliation it refers to.
I'd reverse the order of the Timeline section, and consider building it into a more narrative History section.
Academics section needs more sourcing and your COI shows through in this section with weasel words.
Love the images, I'd move the one of the tower into the infobox and the panorama of the campus into the Campus section using Template:Wide image.
Agree with the above reviewer, needs more references and information, closing review as C-class. Great work overall, keep it up! TritonsRising (talk) 21:19, 21 August 2017 (UTC)[reply]