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Main sequence

This astronomy article on hydrogen-fusing stars like our Sun has recently undergone expansion and I think it has become a reasonably complete discussion of the topic. (It is essentially a sub-page of the more general Hertzsprung-Russell diagram topic.) What do you think needs to be improved to turn this into a quality article?

Thanks, RJH (talk) 22:55, 12 December 2007 (UTC)

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