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List of Lizzie McGuire episodes[edit]

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I've listed this article for peer review because i feel that this article is concise and complete in every respect. I am aiming for a FA status and hence i'm submitting this article for a peer review, so that i can get some feedback and suggestion which wud help in getting it to FA status...Thanks Gprince007 (talk) 17:46, 26 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Matthewedwards (talk · contribs)[edit]

Change the lead to

"This is a list of episodes of Lizzie McGuire, a television comedy series broadcast on the Disney Channel, an American satellite and cable network aimed at children. [[Lizzie McGuire originally aired from....."

That way, the lead sentence is bolded correctly, the wikilinking of the title is done correctly, and you're providing context to the reader in regards to Disney Channel, and mirrors other FLs. Done Gprince007 (talk) 14:59, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Remove the ": 2001-2002" part from the section headers, this doesn't appear in other featured Episode lists
Create articles, if only stubs, for the redlinks Done Gprince007 (talk) 15:46, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Use "Series #" for the column that is currently simply "#". You could also add a "Season #" column, which would be especially helpful in the second season table. Done Gprince007 (talk) 14:59, 1 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Explain what "code" means.
The lead isn't long enough for FL status. At least one other paragraph should be written. This could include DVD and iTunes information. A paragraph saying who the starring actors and the characters they play might be good, too. Check out other Featured episode lists, such as List of The Sopranos episodes, List of Lost episodes and List of Degrassi: The Next Generation episodes Done Gprince007 (talk) 15:46, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
For consistency across Featured episode lists, there should be a season overview table. See the above links for examples Done Gprince007 (talk) 05:51, 10 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
The image could do with being a little bigger. 300px is the max for lead images. Done Gprince007 (talk) 15:46, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Only one reference could make the page automatically fail at WP:FLC. Where is the references for airdates, titles, production codes, writers and directors? Done Gprince007 (talk) 15:46, 7 May 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Until I can see what the page looks like with the above changes, that's all I have for now. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 00:51, 28 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Comment Just to clarify, as a list, this can not become a FA, but it can become a WP:FL (going through the WP:FLC process). Ruhrfisch _><>°^° 01:29, 28 April 2008 (UTC)[reply]