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Andreas Thorkildsen

I did a complete rewrite/expansion of this article today. It is very well referenced, and comprehensible. It has a free image. The lead could perhaps be better, and the construction is pretty good but perhaps becomes a little disorganized towards the end. What improvements does it need to become a good article? Punkmorten 22:21, 1 January 2007 (UTC)

• Needs to be divided into a few logical sections. Right now it seems to be one big block of text. --- RockMFR 23:41, 1 January 2007 (UTC)
  • Satisfactory now? I also expanded the article a bit. Punkmorten 13:35, 3 January 2007 (UTC)