Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Numbered highways in Amenia (CDP), New York/archive1
- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by Matthewedwards 08:17, 31 January 2009 [1].
Just written, theme is pretty rare, but hey, I like it. It should meet all-criteria and is probably exempt from the 10-item rule, as shown in previous FLCs of this kind. Again, open to all comments.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 03:43, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Just of note, I did some copyediting. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 16:56, 17 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)
- Can you alternate the images?
- "federally-maintained" -ly adverbs should not have hyphens after them. (multiple occurences)
- "The entire route system was in place by 1989, with the creation of County Route 81." Comma not necessary.
- "The highway system remained primarily stable"-->The highway system has remained primarily stable
- "Begin/end concurrency (44-22)" I don't understand the notation inside the parenthesis.
- "cemetary " Misspelled.
- "he highway was extended in the 1940s[4] and remained there since."-->he highway was extended in the 1940s[4] and has remained there since. Dabomb87 (talk) 17:58, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Sources look good. Dabomb87 (talk) 00:58, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Unlink the accessdates in {{cite map}}.The citation date format for ref 9 is different from the others; addDabomb87 (talk) 17:58, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]format=PDF
to the cite template.
- All done except for the unlinking. That happens to be a problem in Template:Cite map, I can't figure its code out to fix it.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 11:20, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- I would fix this myself, except I am not an admin. Go to the edit screen of the template. You will see code like the below. Remove the brackets in red.
{{ #if: {{{accessdate|}}} | Retrieved on <font color=red>[[</font>{{{accessdate}}}<font color=red>]]</font>. | {{ #if: {{{accessyear|}}} | Retrieved {{ #if: {{{accessmonth|}}} | on <font color=red>[[</font>{{{accessmonth}}} {{{accessyear}}}<font color=red>]]</font>. | during <font color=red>[[</font>{{{accessyear}}}<font color=red>]]</font>.
Dabomb87 (talk) 16:02, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- All done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 23:22, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Comments from Truco (talk · contribs)
- The two state routes are New York State Route 22, a north–south highway traversing eastern New York, and New York State Route 343, an 18-mile (29 km) east–west highway in Dutchess County. - no need for the comma after "New York"
- There was a realignment of the concurrency between NY 22 and 343, producing CR 81, designated as Old Route 22. - should be "..which was designated as Old Route 22."
- If there are no notes for CR 81, there is no need for the empty column to be there
- There is a spelling mistake with "cemetery"
- Fix DaBomb's sourcing and prose issues.--TRUCO 18:37, 18 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- All done.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 11:20, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Followup: You added a note to the CR 81 column, but it says, literally, that CR 81 is the northern terminus of CR 81, I know this can't be correct.--TRUCO 14:56, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Look at the chart a little more carefully. Its self-explanatory.Mitch32(Go Syracuse) 23:20, 19 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- So "Dutchess" is the northern terminus? Also, no full stop needed for that note.--TRUCO 02:34, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- The intersection charts apply to the highway within the CDP of Amenia, so the northern terminus is CR 81 at the border of the CDP. –Juliancolton Tropical Cyclone 02:36, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- So "Dutchess" is the northern terminus? Also, no full stop needed for that note.--TRUCO 02:34, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
- Support - issues resolved to meet the Featured list criteria.--TRUCO 15:05, 20 January 2009 (UTC)[reply]
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