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- The following is an archived discussion of a featured list nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured list candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.
The list was promoted by The Rambling Man 23:49, 13 March 2013 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Chaminda Vaas[edit]
List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Chaminda Vaas (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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Continuing the cricket offensive on FLC, I'd like to nominate List of international cricket five-wicket hauls by Chaminda Vaas for consideration. I've been taking my time with this, but I think the article meets the standards and is ready to be reviewed. This is my first FLC in more than two years, so please feel free to give it a thorough review. Chamal T•C 02:30, 2 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Support Nothing raised my attention when I was reading the article. However I am not an expert in cricket. Ruslik_Zero 17:45, 2 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from —Vensatry (Ping me) 07:02, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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Resolved comments from Zia Khan 15:40, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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- Per MOS:NUM, when comparing two numbers they should be in the same format, so "with 12 in Tests and four in One Day Internationals" should be either 12 and 4 or twelve and four.
- Cricinfo and CricketArchive both list him as a fast-medium, and given that has a distinct meaning from fast bowler, I would change "As a left arm fast bowler, he was accurate.." to "As a left-arm fast-medium bowler, he was accurate.."
- Minor point, but I would prefer a comma the number in "..accumulated 1155 Test wickets.." (making it 1,155) but it's only a personal preference really, so I'll leave it up to you.
- "..the highest number of wickets he had taken in a single match." Should be "has" not "had".
- Support All in all, a very well written list, and my points above are so minor that I'm happy to support the article even before the requested tweaks are made. Harrias talk 11:23, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Resolved comments from The Rambling Man (talk) 16:15, 8 March 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
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The Rambling Man (talk) 21:06, 3 March 2013 (UTC)[reply] |
- Comment – Note 1 has too much punctuation in the first sentence. Try removing the period after "guessing". Giants2008 (Talk) 21:31, 9 March 2013 (UTC)[reply]
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