Wikipedia:Featured list candidates/Degrassi: The Next Generation (season 6)

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The list was promoted 21:33, 15 April 2008.

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Degrassi: The Next Generation (season 6)

Another season list. Any comments or concerns raised will be addressed. Thank you. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 02:24, 31 March 2008 (UTC) Support as nominatior -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 14:30, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

Resolved stuff from The Rambling Man (talk) 07:41, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)

• "it wasn't until " avoid contractions.
• "at 9:30," p.m. missing? I think there's more than one of these...
• "broadcast episode twelve to fifteen " episodes...
• "broadcast episode twelve to fifteen before it aired episode thirteen" 12 to 15 contains 13... little reword here.
• Link weed to marijuana.
• "as a auto mechanic"...
• " she can't keep " see above.
• "confronts them, which results in his death " No full stop but this needs a bit of a reword to explain how it resulted in his death.
• "is in sorrow. " "is in mourning."?
• "jeopardising " -probably needs a zee?
• "DVD release of season five " season six!

That's it from me. The Rambling Man (talk) 09:43, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

All done. Thank you for the review -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 14:30, 31 March 2008 (UTC)

• Support, sorry for the delay... The Rambling Man (talk) 07:41, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
• Support Looking good.
  • marked the first death in the series of a main character - it's picky, but seems to read better as "the first death of a main character in the series"
  • Publication names in Reception such as Winnipeg Sun should be italicised.
  • Episodes: "dad" to "father" and "mom" to "mother"?
  • her feelings for current boyfriend Peter, and her ex-boyfriend, Sean - latter comma, or even both, not necessary.
  • Pick "webpage" or "web page" and sweep through the article for some consistency.
  • Ellie's ex, Jesse - maybe "ex-boyfriend" is a little more encyclopedic.
• Hope the comments helped! —97198 talk 12:58, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

Thanks for spotting those. They've all been addressed. -- ṃ•α•Ł•ṭ•ʰ•Ə•Щ• @ 16:12, 9 April 2008 (UTC)

• Support This list needs to move along out of the WP:FLC backlogs, where other articles need more attention :) Gary King (talk) 03:46, 15 April 2008 (UTC)

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