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Your submission at Articles for creation: Hazing in Korean Military (June 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed! Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Robert McClenon was:

This submission reads more like an essay than an encyclopedia article. Submissions should summarise information in secondary, reliable sources and not contain opinions or original research. Please write about the topic from a neutral point of view in an encyclopedic manner.

The comment the reviewer left was:

This draft reads like an opinion piece rather than an encyclopedic article This draft needs copy-editing by a native Anglophone.

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Robert McClenon (talk) 19:51, 23 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, Wkdrmstj! Having an article declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Robert McClenon (talk) 19:51, 23 June 2018 (UTC)[reply]

re: Complete first step of assignment

Good job! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 07:18, 17 September 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your class project (Soc of Globalization 2019)

Good job with User:Wkdrmstj/sandbox, it looks almost done, now it's time to finish this and publish the article. Please let me know when you are finished! You also need to finish ko:사용자:정영혁/연습장. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 06:22, 20 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Your submission at Articles for creation: Anti-appeasement Stele has been accepted

Anti-appeasement Stele, which you submitted to Articles for creation, has been created.

Congratulations, and thank you for helping expand the scope of Wikipedia! We hope you will continue making quality contributions.

The article has been assessed as C-Class, which is recorded on its talk page. This is a great rating for a new article, and places it among the top 21% of accepted submissions — kudos to you! You may like to take a look at the grading scheme to see how you can improve the article.

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Thanks again, and happy editing!

DGG ( talk ) 03:59, 28 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]

re: Training finished

Good job with the assignments, both the new one and the old ones. The Anti-appeasement steles article is pretty cool! Good luck finding another interesting topic! Btw, I think your older topic, Hazing, is a very good idea, but it was deleted because it was too short and had too few sources. I'd encourage you to try to work on it again. You can ask for your old draft to be restored, the instructions on how to do so are here: Wikipedia:Requests for undeletion/G13. PS. Please see how to WP:SIGN your posts correctly for the next time you post on talk. Good luck! --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 01:07, 13 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

re: Anti-appeasement_steles

Interesting issue, but I am confused why the article on Heungseon Daewongun does not mention the name Lee Ha-eung? Without understanding this more, I am not sure what advice to offer. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:31, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Article selection

Hazing in the Republic of Korea Armed Forces is a good choice and you can add it to our dashboard. Regarding 연고주의, if you found the term discussed in academic literature, then it is also a good topic. You are right the concept you describe is wider then nepotism, but it does sound like Cronyism. Still, Cronyism in South Korea is a missing topic, so it is a valid choice. I did notice 연고주의 is mentioned on Korean wiki at ko:네포티즘. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:36, 18 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Weekly 10 edits

Please make sure to make your weekly 10 edits for the Collective Intelligence class. As a reminder, if you miss your weekly edits, your score will be lowered by 1 point. But don't worry, you can easily get extra points by making extra edits for extra credit (each 10 extra edits will add another point to your score on average). --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 10:36, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Please add your main topic(s) to our dashbroad

Here. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 02:51, 24 May 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Feedback on your project for Collective Intelligence class

I am afraid I cannot provide any feedback on Hazing in the Republic of Korea Armed Forces since you have not done any edits on it this semester. You also seem not to be doing any of our required 10 weekly edits. Please note that this is likely to affect your grade significantly.~But there are still ~3 weeks remaining in our class, and you can try to do extra credit edits to compensate. I do recommend, however, that you start ASAP. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 05:45, 4 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Good job expanding the article. The article has been improved, but still has some issues 1) please ensure that each paragraph or sentence if necessary has a clear reference (footnote/citation). 2) Each reference should clearly specify the author, date, and publisher. If it is Korean, the Korean title should be cited and also translated. 3) File:Hazing in ROKA.png - this picture will likely be deleted, as it is not freely copyrighted. If you cannot find a freely copyrighted (Creative Commons) license for a photo of hazing in Korea, instead I'd suggest adding a more easy-to-find pictures of bases where such incidents took place. --_{Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus| reply here} 04:44, 17 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Lee Yung

Hello, Wkdrmstj,

Thank you for creating Lee Yung.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Hey, thanks for your contributions here, on Wikipedia. Please add some references to the Lee Yung article you created, since it does not include any. Thanks.---Wikaviani ^{(talk) (contribs)} 21:01, 24 June 2020 (UTC)

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Translating

Hi. When you translate from other language wikis, such as at General strike in September, you need to give attribution:

You must provide copyright attribution in the edit summary accompanying your translation by providing an interlanguage link to the source of your translation. A model attribution edit summary Content in this edit is translated from the existing Korean Wikipedia article at ko:9월 총파업; see its history for attribution.
You should also add the template {{Translated|ko|9월 총파업}} to the talk page.
For more guidance, see Wikipedia:Translation. --John B123 (talk) 17:12, 26 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]