User talk:UniversityofUtahGrad/sandbox

Hi!

I reviewed your Honour Killings page and it seems really up to date and thorough for the specific geography you are referencing. I like how you added the proposed and effect of each possible option. I wonder if you could flip them? I enjoyed learning about the legalities and far the government has come especially recently and most recently in women's advocacy.

Good job!

Jaytro6560 (talk) 21:10, 8 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I have just completed your peer review on Honor Killing. You did a great job bringing it up to date and adding a ton of new information. I appreciate that almost every single section included new information. It gives readers a very clean and smooth transition throughout the article from terminology to legal reforms and activism. Great job! Smajlovic1237 (talk) 16:22, 9 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]