User talk:Sfh3/Amalia Kahana-Carmon

Julia's Peer Review!

Hi Suzanne! I thought this was great, especially given how little information is on the stub you started from! There's not much I think you could add to this - perhaps you could combine the "Biography" and "Family" sections, and maybe add some information about her death and the public reception of her death (I believe it was fairly recent?). Aside from that, if you could figure out how to add an info box with just the basic information about her (maybe a photo (though I've found that to be difficult), her name, date/place of birth/death, and any other info you have) towards the top of your page I think you'd be all set! Oh also you could go in and add hyperlinks to the wiki pages of some of the word/names you mentioned, like Virginia Woolf and Devorah Baron. That'd be easy and make it look even more ~official~ ! Overall great job! Jnf2 (talk) 23:26, 10 November 2019 (UTC)