User talk:Saadk07/sandbox
draft comments
[edit]@Saadk07: I was taking a look at the draft you've made and I have a few comments:
- I think you have {{sandbox}}. on your page, not something like {{Userspace draft}}.
- The list of exhibitors could be reframed as prose, including the notable/central exhibitors.
- Generally citations in the first section (the lead) should only be for very contentious or important claims, otherwise it is a summary of the article contents and so the things mentioned in it should be sourced elsewhere.
- Is there a reason why we focus so much on the 2014 expo?
If you have any questions about these comments, let me know with the {{ping}} template or go to my talk page. Thanks. Adam (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:28, 27 October 2014 (UTC)