User talk:Mho8bx-uva

Re. Khafre enthroned

Could you please come back to the article and bring it to shape?

For one, it needs further paraphrasing of original texts to remove it farther from these sources. Some telltale formulas like "Khafre rigidly sits in his throne wearing the royal linen nemes headdress", "small number of basic formulaic types used during the Old Kingdom" are directly lifted from sources (for instance Gardner) and need to be paraphrased. Please see WP:Plagiarism for further advice.

And of course it needs a proper introduction per WP:LEAD and imagery.

Cheers, East of Borschov 04:02, 24 November 2010 (UTC)