User talk:Melendb/sandbox

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Nice start on your draft, but everything you add to Wikipedia needs to be supported by an inline reference. Eeverything you add to Wikipedia needs to be tied directly to a reliable source. After the statement, there should be a source. You can use a single source to support several sentences in a row, if it supports everything you say in those sentences, but you need to have at least one source per paragraph, and you shouldn't have any text after the final reference in a paragraph (because that content is effectively unsourced). Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:25, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It looks like one of your classmates, Beepboop327 also worked on the same article. Make sure to coordinate your edits with them. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 18:29, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]