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May 2024[edit]

Information icon Welcome to Wikipedia. We appreciate your contributions, but in one of your recent edits to Christian nationalism, it appears that you have added original research, which is against Wikipedia's policies. Original research refers to material—such as facts, allegations, ideas, and personal experiences—for which no reliable, published sources exist; it also encompasses combining published sources in a way to imply something that none of them explicitly say. Please be prepared to cite a reliable source for all of your contributions. You can have a look at the tutorial on citing sources. Thank you. ButlerBlog (talk) 02:05, 4 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@MagyarNavy1918 - thank you for your effort on the Right-wing populism page - I've added two templates to help you get the hang of editing by noting when to add sources to support text that is written in an encyclopedic tone. Superb Owl (talk) 21:42, 6 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Excellent work[edit]

Hello. Excellent job on writing a section on Israeli conservatism.

Since it's such a comprehensive presentation of the topic, I suggest that you incorporate it into a new article called Conservatism in Israel, with distinct headings, which could then be expanded additionally, either by yourself or others. There are many other nations that already have an article for their variant of conservatism, and Israel deserves one as well, given that conservatism is now the dominant ideology of the nation and that their brand of conservatism is unique.

Meanwhile, the current presentation in the main article on conservatism could be summarized more concisely, so that it focuses only on the most essential aspects of the topic and gives as succinct an introduction as possible. The current length of nine paragraphs is quite extensive, and it could be shortened to at least seven. My suggestion is that the paragraphs about Neturei Karta and United Arab List be excluded due to their peripheral place outside of mainstream conservatism, although these sections should definitely be included in a larger article on Conservatism in Israel. Trakking (talk) 09:06, 23 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]