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Happy editing! VVikingTalkEdits 12:15, 28 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

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The Feminine Mystique Peer Review

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Hello. It's a shame the cluebot mistook your edits for vandalism! I wonder how much of your work the cluebot deleted. I like that you chose to edit The Feminine Mystique since we learned about that in class. I noticed that in the sentence, "She states 'Anatomy is woman's destiny...'", there was a comma missing after "states." The comma was also missing after "argues" in the sentence, "She argues 'In a sense that goes beyond...'" It's just a minor grammatical mistake, which I actually edited in the article. In the sentence, "Friedan goes onto argue that the problem is a women needing to mature and find their human identity," it should be either "a woman" or "women." Personally, I think "women" sounds better. I noticed that the external link in your citation doesn't work. You can click on it, but it comes up with a 404 error. That's something important you might want to try to fix. -Zoeydodson (talk) 03:44, 9 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

December 2014

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Hello, and welcome to Wikipedia. This is a message letting you know that one or more of your recent edits to Simone de Beauvoir has been undone by an automated computer program called ClueBot NG.

Please refrain from making unconstructive edits to Wikipedia, as you did at The Feminine Mystique. Your edits appear to constitute vandalism and have been automatically reverted.

English

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Sorry, I reverted some of your edits. I couldn't understand what it said. It also had many grammar errors and the source seemed weak. Maybe English is not your first language. Bhny (talk) 20:00, 10 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]