User talk:Leahym1

your page looks awesome! --Kfoche (talk) 17:04, 22 February 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Hey Mare Kate its Chris Cardilino I looked over your edits and they look very nicely done. I only have a couple of concerns. At the beginning of your article where it describes Anterograde Amnesia I feel like that would be a good time to use a wikipedia page link. Also on the rough draft I got from Dr. D it didnt have your references cited which is pretty important and lastly your sentence about half way through your edit "Most likely, damage to the hippocampus and surrounding cortices in the brain occurred when Earl was attacked by the assailant." seems a little biased if you could find a way to re word without "most likely" I think that would really help, but other than those things I think your edit is really good! Cardilinoc1 (talk) 21:42, 30 March 2012 (UTC)[reply]