User talk:Julie.Sto/Short Food Supply Chains

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"SFSCs have multiply definitions" = For this part, I suggest that you describe a few from different time periods and briefly describe and compare them.

newtorks = In the Community Networks section, double check the spelling

On a more general note, in certain parts where you describe and enumerate certain things, it is slightly elusive, try to jump directly into the content. Frederiquehm (talk) 15:41, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I am looking through my work and adjusting the content while keeping your suggestions in mind Julie.Sto (talk) 23:59, 14 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

In your "Sustainability Practices" eludes to empirical evidence, case studies or success stories, try to reframe the title to focus more on the concept of sustainability and its core concepts. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Frederiquehm (talk • contribs) 15:51, 8 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you! Yes I agree with this and I changed the heading to reflect the content Julie.Sto (talk) 00:00, 15 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]