User talk:Jennifert02
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Elysia (Wiki Ed) (talk) 17:30, 23 January 2019 (UTC)
Peer-Review[edit]
Hi Jennifer, I read through everything you have added and it will definitely improve the current article. The only thing I would suggest is that you add to the Independent section. The article mentions it offers three solutions and I saw you added to the third one. Maybe see if you find something you can add something about the first and second. Also, I would edit the second sentence of the Introduction section (A customer can choose…) the part where it says “to him or her or” to something along the lines of the customer can choose to have the food delivered or choose to pick it up. The only reason I suggest this is not because it’s wrong or anything just that since there are two “or” it was a little confusing when I first read it. As for the sources you used I was not able to directly select 1-10 like you can easily do with 11-16. If you can, try to see if there’s any way to make them like 11-16 which will take you directly to the source. Overall, everything looks great just little things that need fixing. Svila010 (talk) 02:03, 4 April 2019 (UTC)