User talk:Hdesro1/sandbox

Editing Assignment

I plan on editing Kunai. I plan on editing any grammatical or diction errors I may find.

Approved. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:24, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Sources Assignment

I plan on adding sources to the article on Paradise Fish.Hdesro1 (talk) 02:48, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Good choice. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:25, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Sources

Identification of lymphocystis disease virus from paradise fish Macropodus opercularis

Antipredator Behavior in Paradise Fish (Macropodus opercularis ) Larvae: The Role of Genetic Factors and Paternal Influence.

Learning to find the opponent: An ethological analysis of the behavior of paradise fish (Macropodus opercularis) in intra- and interspecific encounters.

Diversity in Agonistic Behavior of Croaking Gouramis (Trichopsis vittata, T. schalleri, and T. pumila; Anabantoidei) and the Paradise Fish (Macropodus opercularis; Anabantoidei).

Reversal learning by paradise fish (Macropodus opercularis). — Preceding unsigned comment added by Hdesro1 (talk • contribs) 22:03, 10 February 2015 (UTC)

Your sources look good. Josef Horáček (talk) 20:29, 16 February 2015 (UTC)

Great job adding the sources. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead Assignment

The article whose lead I plan to add is Sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs.

Hdesro1 (talk) 23:49, 19 February 2015 (UTC)

Summary of article:

I feel like the article is very well balanced and in order. The sections shown are given an appropriate amount of information for their relativity of the topic; and they also are arranged in an organized, easy to read way. For example, the concept sexual dimorphism is given a nice moderately sized paragraph; however, the examples and evidence of sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs is given a much longer, more detailed section.

Hdesro1 (talk) 04:29, 23 February 2015 (UTC)

Good choice. Josef Horáček (talk) 19:38, 24 February 2015 (UTC)

Lead:

Sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs refers to the different physical characteristics of male and female dinosaurs of the same species. This means that the male and female dinosaurs of a species may differ in size, color, shape, or they may even look like a completely different species altogether, such as in the case of the Anglerfish. These differing physical characteristics can also be the deciding factor for choosing a mate or can be helpful for blending into the surrounding environment. Researching sexual dimorphism in dinosaurs can be extremely difficult because suitable tissue and skeletal samples are required for testing, and most fossils and other samples have been damaged by decomposition and fossilization.

Hdesro1 (talk) 03:51, 25 February 2015 (UTC)

This is finished. Josef Horáček (talk) 18:07, 2 March 2015 (UTC)