User talk:Engl101mcrae
1) Did your partner follow the format guidelines for a Wikipedia article (contains a lead and a reference list, the right things are bolded, section headings are correct, etc.)? If not, what needs to be altered to make it look like a Wikipedia article? Yes; Looks perfect
2) Is the article well-written? (“its prose is engaging, even brilliant, and of a professional standard”) Select one sentence that you consider to be well-written. Also select at least one sentence where the writing could be clarified or polished up to make the article more interesting and informative.
Well-written: The British Edition of Vogue is a fashion magazine that has been published since the autumn of 1916.
Needs work: And, there were notables from famed writers such as Virginia Wolfe and Aldous Huxley.
3) Is the article comprehensive? (“it neglects no major facts or details and places the subject in context”) List one section of the article you find to be very comprehensive. Also list one section of the article that needs to be expanded or contextualized better to make the article more complete and persuasive.
Comprehensive: History
Needs work: Criticism
4) Is the article well-researched? (“it is a thorough and representative survey of the relevant literature”) If the sources listed are from websites, follow the links. List each website and include whether you find it to be credible or not.
Websites:http://www.vogue.co.uk/voguemediapack/swfa/.html No, didn't work http://www.vogue.co.uk/_error-friendly/500.asp?aspxerrorpath=/magazine/archive/issue/2008/March.html No, didn't work http://www.guardian.co.uk/lifeandstyle/2008/feb/10/fashion.features1 Yes http://www.telegraph.co.uk/comment/personal-view/3634159/At-500-pages-the-veteran-style-bible-looks-heftier-than-many-of-its-size-zero-models.html Yes http://www.vogue.co.uk/magazine/archive/search/Editor/Elspeth%20Champcommunal.html Yes http://www.guardian.co.uk/fashion/fashion-blog/2011/nov/01/yak-chic-vogue.html No, didn't work
5) Is the article neutral? (“it presents views fairly and without bias”) Does it fulfill the Wikipedia ideal of Neutral Point of View (NPOV)? Include any sentences that appear to be biased.
Biased sentences: The magazine is considered to be one that links fashion to high society and class.
6) Is the article of the correct length? (“It stays focused on the main topic without going into unnecessary detail”) Does it meet the minimum length requirement for the class of 2 pages of text double spaced? Maybe a little short
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