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I plan on fixing issues in this article https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/African-American_Civil_Rights_Movement_%281954%E2%80%9368%29 Dom&Kish (talk) 14:28, 10 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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Hi Dom&Kish, I find the African-American Civil Rights Movement article very interesting as I am analyzing the same one. Although I'm aware that you are fixing the article up, you may want to look into adding information about the Jim Crow Laws and how it contributed to the Civil Rights Movement. If you need any assistance in going about this, you can surely contact me!

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Hi Dom&Kish I take a lot of personal interest in the topic you have chosen - American Civil Rights. I looked at the article you will be editing and may I suggest editing and including additional information on the section about Rosa Parks? There are a few grammatical errors however I think it is important to note the further contributions that Mrs. Parks has made towards civil rights. I had the privilege and opportunity to travel through out the the USA with Mrs. Parks (1998-1999) and had learned a lot of incredible things from her. She and her husband Raymond went on to establish the Rosa and Raymond Parks Institute for Self-Development in an effort to help educate, support and guide many African American youth to success. I am certainly open to talk to you about this experience if it is of any interest to you or if it can help your assignment in anyway. Goodluck!! I look forward to reading your additions! July.love30 (talk) 21:54, 30 March 2015 (UTC)[reply]

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If you study Rosa Parks, don't forget Claudette Colvin, who many people consider the Mother of the Civil Rights Movement. Randy Kryn 14:00 10 April, 2015 (UTC)

Hi. It's semi-usual (or semi-unusual, which turns in on itself in the middle and ends up in the same place) to continue a conversation on the talk page where it started. What I did is put a 'watch' on your talk page, so I'll see an answer. Yes, and you're welcome. Civil Rights Movement tidbits?, I've got a million of them (or at least a dozen). Before I wrote here I also left you a note on the talk page of the CRMovement article, where I'd found your original note. A question, looking at the assignment page you linked it looks like your project ends in two days, are you still going to continue? Thanks, and good to meet you. Randy Kryn 19:30 10 April, 2015 (UTC)

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Hey Dom&kish, I'm your project partner, DahliasAndRoses. Just trying to connect with you and try this page out. — Preceding unsigned comment added by DahliasAndRoses (talk • contribs) 16:53, 2 April 2015 (UTC)[reply]