User talk:Angmadera0509/sandbox
Peer Review: Katia Flores
I think you did a great job expanding on this article! I agree with your final comment on it needing some additional citations, as I don't see sources in many of your comments. Additionally, there's one sentence regarding Chavez' changed sexuality that I feel could be rewritten to sound neutral, suck as "Rivera had no prior experience writing comics before the Miss America series, which some believe explains Chavez' sudden change in sexual identity in order to represent the LGBTQ community."
Otherwise I think this was fantastic, although a little more background on Miss America's cultural origins would be nice.
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