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Happy editing! Vermont | reply here 11:53, 14 April 2018 (UTC)
April 2018
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Your addition to Epidemiology of motor vehicle collisions has been removed, as it appears to have added copyrighted material to Wikipedia without evidence of permission from the copyright holder. If you are the copyright holder, please read Wikipedia:Donating copyrighted materials for more information on uploading your material to Wikipedia. For legal reasons, Wikipedia cannot accept copyrighted material, including text or images from print publications or from other websites, without an appropriate and verifiable license. All such contributions will be deleted. You may use external websites or publications as a source of information, but not as a source of content, such as sentences or images—you must write using your own words. Wikipedia takes copyright violations very seriously and persistent violators will be blocked from editing. See Wikipedia:Copying text from other sources for more information.
Copy-paste from https://ec.europa.eu/transport/road_safety/sites/roadsafety/files/ersosynthesis2016-vehiclesafety15_en.pdf © European Union, 1995-2017
Dennis Bratland (talk) 19:57, 15 April 2018 (UTC)
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- Due to copyrighted material Wikipedia considerations, the text has now been reworded as follows:
- «Various kind of crash collision may exist. The more typical crash occurs when a car crashes in something in front of it.
- In such a crash the vehicle might be stopped, but due to the inertia the car occupant speed does not decrease, which will make him meet/crash against the car structure, with the energy due to the Kinetic effect.
- However restraint technologies — such as seat belt applied to the pelvis and rib cage — reduce the speed of the car occupant, which might avoid the car occupant crash against the vehicle structure, or reduce the speed and energy when the body impacts the vehicle»
- If there is any quote or any copyright issue, feel free to reword it with other words. The source is available i a ref tag. The main idea is that when the car stop, the things within the car continue with their initial speed unless if stopped in some way.— Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.67.188.170 (talk • contribs) 18:54, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
- This version might not be copyrighted, but it is nearly incoherent. The English grammar and word use is so garbled that the reader is left guessing what the text is trying to say. It's not really helpful to add confusing and potentially misleading content to articles, and generally articles are worse off with content that makes no sense than with no content at all. It's possible for another editor to check your sources and rewrite it so that it makes sense, but until they get to that, it is leaving readers misinformed.
Rather than leave articles with incoherent content, you should post edit suggestions to the article's talk page. Post your proposed addition and your sources, and wait for another editor to copyedit it and add it to the article. --Dennis Bratland (talk) 19:18, 16 April 2018 (UTC)
- Thanks for explaining this.
- This version might not be copyrighted, but it is nearly incoherent. The English grammar and word use is so garbled that the reader is left guessing what the text is trying to say. It's not really helpful to add confusing and potentially misleading content to articles, and generally articles are worse off with content that makes no sense than with no content at all. It's possible for another editor to check your sources and rewrite it so that it makes sense, but until they get to that, it is leaving readers misinformed.
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