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Hassan II Mosque

• Fails GA criterion 1a:
  • "The construction work involved engagement of 35,000 workers and working of over 50 million hours."
  • "The basilical plan of the mosque justifies this layout of the boulevard.[9]."

• Fails GA criterion 6, too close paraphrasing and misrepresentation of sources:
  • What the article says"
    • "When devout Muslims look at the mosque they are reminded of the verse from Quran 'His throne was upon the water'."
  • What the source cited says:
    • ""When devout Muslims look upon the beautiful view of the Atlantic Ocean they are reminded of the verse from the Quran ...".

Chicago Teachers Union

• Fails GA criterion 1a:
  • "Teachers also claimed of egregious class sizes and poorly maintained schools."
  • "By September, was the largest teachers union in the U.S., with over 8500 members."
  • "Meanwhile, man teachers felt shortchanged and emasculated."
  • "Practically, this meant the banks were loaning the city money."

SS Santa Paula (1916)

• Fails GA criterion 1a:
  • "She then transported American troops home from France making four additional round-trip voyages from New York to Brest Bordeaux, and St. Nazaire between 22 March and 1 August."

The Treatise (Walter of Bibbesworth)

• Fails GA criterion 3a, in that it does not cover the major aspects of its topic.

Sacred Heart Cathedral (Kamloops)

• Fails GA criterion 3a, in that it does not cover the major aspects of its topic
• Fails GA criterion 1a:
  • "The first mass said by Father LeJeune."

Retskrivningsordbogen

• Fails GA criterion 1a:
  • "The new rules were published in 2004 in a booklet titled Kommaregler (Comma Rules).[7]."
  • "Despite persistent attempts by the Language Council to promote it, the new comma was not widely used and it was often criticized in the public debate." What public debate?
  • "The two rather similar grammatical comma systems were merged into a single system under which one is free to choose one or other approach to the single issue on which they differed."