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User:Youssef.ramy/Egypt's Islamic Cultural Center/Miraydwerri Peer Review

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The article has many sources, which makes the information non-biased; however, there are no links, and the in-text citations are not added as wikipedia citations - just numbers. The architecture section needs to be divided into interior and exterior for better clarity. The introduction should be a little longer with more information in it about the location, the visitors,... etc.

Some of the sources are not cited correctly and some I think you need to re-check their validity. Pictures could enhance the visualization of the place as well as increase viewers. Overall, the article is informative.

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