User:Sddavis4/Box braids/Smalls12 Peer Review
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Sddavis4
From the introductory paragraph, it's clear what the topic of the page is. The paragraph provides a lengthy explanation of what the topic is leaving no room for confusion. This foundation will help the readers follow the rest of the information on the page. The introduction however, doesn't include the all the contents that's covered on the page. The information on the page is up to date and very detailed. There's no information that needs to be added to the page. It's completed already. No grammar mistakes are presented on the page. The content is well written and easy to follow. The page looks presentable from layout to the pictures. The two images give readers a visual of what the braids look like. Other than that, it doesn't enhance the page that much. Overall, Sddavis4 did a great job editing this article. I can't think of any improvements that's needed.