User:Rdantonioo/Santa Maria dei Miracoli, Venice/Adammilewski Peer Review

General info

Whose work are you reviewing?

Rdantonioo

Link to draft you're reviewing

User:Rdantonioo/Santa Maria dei Miracoli, Venice

Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Santa Maria dei Miracoli, Venice

Evaluate the drafted changes

Lead

• I think the lead for the article is a good short summary so far and provides a short introduction for where the church is, the making of the church and what it was originally made for. I think something that you can add to the lead of the article is an introduction for the topics that the article will be covering. Maybe just add the main idea that will be covered in the sections for history, artwork, and architecture.

Content

• In the sandbox draft of your article I think you have some really good ideas regarding the content that you can add to your article. I think it's important to talk about the church's history and the original construction as well as the eventual restoration of the church. The addition of talking about the artwork and sculpture in the church is a great addition as well. In the architecture section that you have added the subsection of the material and the design of the church I think is an important subsection and I believe that you will be able to expand a lot on this topic. Overall I think you have some great ideas of what you want to add to the article, you just have to actually go out do the research and incorporate those ideas into your paper.

Sources and References

• I see the comment that your sources are in your personal sandbox! Just make sure when you add the articles into your actual article make sure the links work and that they are from reliable places.

Images and Media

• Images can be a great addition to your article. Just make sure to properly caption them and add citations for the images if necessary. I think a great addition to the article can be churches that are similar in architecture or made by the same architect to compare the structure and common techniques seen in different churches. Also maybe finding a picture of the planning used to build the church would be a great addition.

Overall impressions

Overall I think you have some great ideas for the article, you just need to conduct the research, find relevant articles, and find a way to portray that information from a neutral standpoint in your article!