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Article evaluation:
- Shark Finning:
- Posted about the citations used that are within this article on the Talk Page. As there is a ton of information on this page that relates to shark finning
- Fixed spelling errors within the Shark Finning article from mark to shark.
- Added two photos of a map that shows World Trade vs Non-Trade of Shark finning.
- Next will be working on updating the US portion of the article as the information stated it out of date.
Added the following content into shark finning article. "In recent decades high demands and numerous forces of economic globalization has come together to create a true global mart. There has been a combination of growth and antifinning regulations that has led fishers to see sharks as a commercial species. This has unintentionally caused commercial species to be targeted rather than targeting more-valuable species like tuna and swordfish. However, the emergence of a new market for shark fins with addition to stricter regulations has all created a greater incentive for the full utilization of the shark. Now this is an important aspect to consider, as where antifinning and environmental groups can be successful in terms of decreasing the consumption and the practice of shark finning." Resource: United Nations Food and Agriculture Organization.
- Added a Untied Nation header to article
- Airplane - changing my article edits to Wiki Airplane.
- Review citations ensure all links are working
- Reading through article all links are displaying current material through WiKi
- Main articles has been noted and reviewed for propulsion, paragraphs are showing new sentence structure than their main article.
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Edited article Great Pacific garbage patch and commented on Laura.smith450 talk post. Changed(They consume it and the plastic enters the food chain. This can lead to greater problems when species start consuming species that have ingested plastics.) to When marine life consumes plastic allowing it to enter the food chain, this can lead to greater problems when species that have consumed plastic are being eaten by other predators.
As there was short sentence when a com-mum could have been used to combine as it was the same thought.