User:MaryGaulke/sandbox/Applied Materials requests
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Hi! As noted above, I work for a communications agency that represents Applied Materials. It's been a year and a half since my last post and I'd like to request a few updates to this article:
- In infobox:
- Update Chairman to Thomas J. Iannotti[1]
- Latest top-level numbers:
- Organization section: As GermanJoe noted above, the intro to this section is in conflict with the number of subsections. I propose the following changes:
- Update first sentence:
Applied is organized into three major business sectors: Semiconductor Systems, Applied Global Services, and Display and Adjacent Markets.[3]
- Rename "Silicon Systems" subsection to "Semiconductor Systems"[3]
- Rename "Display" to "Display and Adjacent Markets"[3]
- Rename "Service" to "Applied Global Services" and move "Automation Software" to be a subsection of that section[3]
- Create a new subsection, "Former business segments," containing the Energy and Environmental Solutions subsection
- Update first sentence:
- Management section:
Due to my COI, I won't be editing directly. I'd appreciate any help or feedback in getting these edits implemented. Thank you!
References
- ^ a b "Applied Materials Names Thomas Iannotti as Chairman of the Board of Directors". Printed Electronics Now. 10 March 2017. Retrieved 19 October 2017.
- ^ a b c d e f "Applied Materials Delivers All-Time Record Performance" (Press release). Applied Materials, Inc. 16 November 2017. Retrieved 20 November 2017.
- ^ a b c d "Applied Materials Announces Record Results" (Press release). Applied Materials. 18 August 2016. Retrieved 19 October 2017.
- ^ Lombardo, Cara (24 July 2017). "NXP Semiconductors CFO Leaves for Applied Materials". The Wall Street Journal. Retrieved 19 October 2017.