Template:Did you know nominations/WTCE-TV

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The result was: promoted by Bruxton (talk) 17:33, 14 March 2023 (UTC)

WTCE-TV

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... that a Florida TV station claimed freeze damage as the reason it had to delay its first broadcast? Source: https://www.newspapers.com/clip/120433853/tv-station-cuts-staff-delayed-its/
- Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/The Scout Mindset
- Comment: An interesting article where most of the possible hooks are laden with acronyms and the main storyline is quite tortuous...

5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk). Self-nominated at 05:49, 9 March 2023 (UTC). Post-promotion hook changes for this nom will be logged at Template talk:Did you know nominations/WTCE-TV; consider watching this nomination, if it is successful, until the hook appears on the Main Page.

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook eligibility:

Cited:
Interesting:
Other problems: - Would like a little more

QPQ: Done.

Overall: @Sammi Brie: Good article but I feel as if the hook is too vague to me as it doesn't really explain what the freeze damage was aside from simply "freeze damage". Personally i'd prefer a little more on what the freeze damage was. Onegreatjoke (talk) 20:25, 9 March 2023 (UTC)

- @Onegreatjoke: All the source supports would be this: Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 07:12, 10 March 2023 (UTC)

ALT0a: * ... that a Florida TV station claimed freeze damage to its transmitter as the reason it had to delay its first broadcast?

That's a better hook to me. Onegreatjoke (talk) 17:14, 10 March 2023 (UTC)