Template:Did you know nominations/Koma Kulshan Project

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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Allen3 talk 10:33, 27 July 2015 (UTC)

Koma Kulshan Project[edit]

QPQ: Template:Did you know nominations/Surya Upanishad

Created by Brianhe (talk) and NortyNort (talk). Self-nominated by Brianhe at 01:12, 19 July 2015 (UTC).

  • The word "volcano" is not mentioned in the article and needs to be if you are going to include it in the hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 06:05, 23 July 2015 (UTC)
Wow, I didn't realize ... it's a problem for sure. Fixing... Brianhe (talk) 06:12, 23 July 2015 (UTC) @Cwmhiraeth: Ready for you to continue reviewing, if you please. Brianhe (talk) 18:54, 24 July 2015 (UTC)
  • This article is long enough and new enough. The original hook is well sourced and I have struck ALT1 (which I actually prefer) because it lacks an inline citation. The article is neutral and does not contain close paraphrasing, as far as I can see. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 05:30, 25 July 2015 (UTC)