Template:Did you know nominations/Hekani Jakhalu
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The result was: promoted by Yoninah (talk) 18:59, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
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Hekani Jakhalu
- ... that Hekani Jakhalu has helped over 20,000 young entrepreneurs from Nagaland? Source: "Jakhalu made her way back to Kohima where she began an NGO that works with the government to "empower Naga youth"" & "Youthnet, the organisation Jakhalu founded [...] claims to have benefited at least 23,500 people" - https://indianexpress.com/article/north-east-india/nagaland/ahead-of-polls-what-youth-in-nagaland-elections-say-they-really-want-jobs-5060205/
Moved to mainspace by Mujinga (talk). Self-nominated at 03:41, 24 November 2020 (UTC).
@Mujinga: This article is new enough and (just) long enough. The article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. A QPQ has been done. The hook needs rewording because it is the organisation that she set up that has helped the young people, and the number helped is a claim made by the organisation rather than an attested fact. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:11, 30 November 2020 (UTC)
- Hiya Cwmhiraeth thanks for the review, I don't see much of a difference between her helping and the NGO she set up helping, plus the number is given in a reliable source, although I suppose you could say the claim is what is reported. I can offer some ALTs with the same source, but I find the hookiness a bit diluted. See what you think! Mujinga (talk) 11:47, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
- ALT1 DYK that ... a non-governmental organisation set up by Hekani Jakhalu helps young entrepreneurs from Nagaland?
- ALT2 DYK that ... an organisation set up by Hekani Jakhalu claims to have helped over 23,500 young entrepreneurs from Nagaland?
Approving ALT1 and ALT2. They are less hooky but more accurate I think. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 20:14, 1 December 2020 (UTC)
