Template:Did you know nominations/Eucidaris metularia

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The result was: promoted by Ashwin147 (talk) 17:44, 16 April 2013 (UTC).

Eucidaris metularia[edit]

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~~... that the ten-lined urchin (pictured) was one of several sea urchins used in research to determine the feasibility of using non-invasive MRI technology to study internal anatomy?~~

Reviewed: Not a self nom

Created by Cwmhiraeth (talk). Nominated by Rcej (talk) at 11:17, 26 March 2013 (UTC).

New: Good. Length: Over 1700. Policy: Could you cite he specific pages within the site you're using for reference 2 t make it easier for the reader to verify the information? Abyssal (talk) 18:25, 26 March 2013 (UTC)

That is not required, because the pages are not available, it can be accepted in good faith, and ref 2 is not associated with the hook! ;) -- Rcej (Robert) – talk 03:28, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

That web reference has two clickable links, one leading to "Habitat and distribution" and one to "Biology". Hope that helps. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 13:52, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

Yeah, but shouldn't those pages be cited themelves? Abyssal (talk) 16:41, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Well, I don't know. I have not done so in the past but I have now cited them separately in this article. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:30, 28 March 2013 (UTC)

Hook length is good, but I think it needs to be rephrased so that it is clear that it was an early attempt using MRIs to study sea urchin inner anatomy rather than just an early use of MRI for studying internal anatomy generally. Abyssal (talk) 15:55, 1 April 2013 (UTC)

How is this, then? I have struck out the original hook. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:28, 10 April 2013 (UTC)

ALT1 ... that the ten-lined urchin (pictured) was one of several species used in research to determine the feasibility of using non-invasive MRI technology to study the internal anatomy of echinoids?

Newly supplied ALT1 hook needs reviewing. BlueMoonset (talk) 06:50, 15 April 2013 (UTC)

I'll pass this nomination with the alt hook. Abyssal (talk) 15:40, 15 April 2013 (UTC)