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The result was: rejected by Victuallers (talk) 21:47, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

Curd of Bogra

Curd of Bogra
Curd of Bogra

Created by Mehediabedin (talk). Self-nominated at 12:01, 10 March 2022 (UTC).

  • It will be an honour to review the queen's favourite dish :} Mujinga (talk) 14:15, 10 March 2022 (UTC)
General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

  • Adequate sourcing: Yes
  • Neutral: Yes
  • Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing: No - ? earwig gives 0% but sources are in bengali; i am concerned by googletranslating the business insider article - it says "The Nawab of Bogra invited the British Governor Sir John Anderson [...] And after eating it, he was so impressed that he arranged to send Bogra curd to his aunts and uncles in England" our article says " the Nawab of Bogra invited Sir John Anderson, the British Governor. He was so impressed by Curd of House of Nawab that he arranged for Curd of Bogra to be sent to his relatives in England" -that's too close for me.

further, the recipe section says in source translation: "Pour the milk into a clean pan or skillet. Put the pan in the oven. Now keep burning. The slower the fire in the oven, the more delicious the yogurt will be. Now decide whether to make white or ghee colored yoghurt. If you want to make white yoghurt, take the pan down after a couple of hours. Put the pan in the oven for three to three and a half hours for ghee colored yoghurt. When the milk boils from 2 kg to 1 kg, pour sugar in it. Wait until the sugar melts. When the milk boils, lower the pan. Wait until cool. Heat a clay pot or saucer. Now pour cold milk on it. Mix one pinch of old curd well with milk. Now jump and cover the saree. Remove from the heat and leave for four hours. If it does not freeze, take another one and a half to two hours. Serve chilled after freezing." and we have: "Pour the milk into a clean pan or skillet. Put the pan in the oven. Then keep burning. The slower the fire in the oven, the more delicious the curd will be. Now decide whether to make white or ghee colored curd. If you want to make white curd, take the pan down after a couple of hours. Put the pan in the oven for three to three and a half hours for ghee colored yoghurt. When the milk boils from 2 kg to 1 kg, pour sugar in it. Wait until the sugar melts. When the milk boils, lower the pan. Wait until cool. Heat a clay pot or saucer. Now pour cold milk on it. Mix one pinch of old curd well with milk. Now cover the pot. Remove from the heat and leave for four hours. If it does not freeze, take another one and a half to two hours. Serve chilled after freezing" - that's not acceptable so I'm failing this and marking the article as copyvio Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: No - (doesn't mater now) AGF but the cite would need to be on sentences
  • Interesting: Yes
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: None required.

Overall: Mujinga (talk) 14:31, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

@Mujinga: Sorry for violating copyright. I rewrote the article and submitted. Now waiting for approval of administrator. Mehedi Abedin 15:29, 10 March 2022 (UTC)

Attempt to rewrite became more close paraphrasing. Remove nom. Victuallers (talk) 21:47, 13 March 2022 (UTC)

@Victuallers: Is it possible to open the nomination? An administrator approved my rewritten article. Mehedi Abedin 18:52, 23 March 2022 (UTC)

Really. That is odd as it still needs a strong copy edit, it has a random list of shops, and its too short for DYK. I think you need to find a buddy to assist you. You can ask at the teahouse to find one. Victuallers (talk) 21:02, 23 March 2022 (UTC)