Talk:Shelley Matheson/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 30 August 2013 (UTC)
Comments quick ones, many of which I've said before....
- Please see other similar reviews:
- En-dashes.
- Starting paras with surname rather than She.
- Repetitive "she" in sentences (see Personal, five in a row...)
- WP:LEAD, four paras is too much for a short article.
- Captions (incomplete sentences don't need a full stop).
- "Gliders team mate Bridie Kean attended her graduation.[6]" trivial.
- What's the point of abbreviated DAS if you don't use it?
- "Women's Wheelchair basketball" or "Women's wheelchair basketball" (infobox).
- "against Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team" do you mean "against Germany"?
- Ref 6 looks odd.
- Ref 16 "Services — University of" should be an en-dash, not an em-dash.
I'll put it on hold for a few days, and I would also ask you to fix up the remaining GANs you've mass-nominated with these common problems. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:41, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
Further
- I don't understand "Chaplin competed with the Gliders at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. In the gold medal game against Germany at the 2012 Summer Paralympics".
- Why link Oz at the 2012 Paralympics second time round?
- Removed duplicated links with the link tool
- Stat table headings need en-dashes.
- Added ndashes
- Ref col shouldn't be sortable.
- Made table non-sortable
- FTM-A col doesn't sort correctly.
- Made table non-sortable
- Nor does FGM-A.
- Made table non-sortable
- Two seasons in that table appear to be grey, the other three not. Why?
- Made table non-sortable
The Rambling Man (talk) 15:58, 13 September 2013 (UTC)