Talk:Vivo (Luis Miguel album)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 08:32, 10 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

of the second leg of Amarte Es Un Placer Tour. → add "his" before the tour's title
in a live audio CD format, DVD, and VHS format → in a live audio CD, DVD and VHS format
were released as singles for the album → state "made available" here to avoid word repetition
On its release → After its release
link "critics" to Music journalism
Miguel received several accolades including a Grammy → comma before "including"
certified triple platinum+gold → certified triple Platinum and Gold

Infobox

You need a more appropriate alt text for the cover where you describe what the user can see in the picture given

Background and release

Place the audio sample on the left in the first paragraph
live covers of "Y" and "La Bikina". → specify that these are her singles
while the video album launched on → while the video album was launched on
It is first Spanish-language live album → place "the" before "first"
"La Bikina" was released as the lead single → say "was made available" here to avoid word repeition
with Mexican Independence Day → "the" before "Mexican..."
It peaked at two → you need to say "number two"

Critical reception

On its release, Vivo → After its release
state that the reviews were written by music critics and link them to Music journalism
Please link AllMusic to its respective article and fix "Allmusic" to AllMusic in the reviews box
and the mariachi songs. Torres concluded: "Miguel's → and the mariachi songs, concluding: "Miguel's
Year of release for MTV Unplugged in brackets
Same for El Alma al Aire
Same for Paulina

Commercial performance

Year of release for Mi Reflejo in brackets
platinum → Platinum
never shorten out United States to US; write "America" here to avoid word repetition
link Recording Industry Association of America
ninth bestselling → ninth best-selling
In Argentina, Vivo debuted on the top → In Argentina, Vivio debuted atop the
double platinum → double Platinum
while the video received platinum certification → while the video received a Platinum certification
triple platinum → triple Platinum
the album was certified triple platinum+gold → the record was awarded Platinum and Gold
a gold certification → a Gold certification

Track listing

flawless ;)

Charts

Fixed things here by myself

Certifications

flawless ;)

Personnel

Section should be placed before "Track listing"
Well, I think the section is not needed; I mean, there are only two credited persons which are already included in the article's body

Other stuff

Copy-violation

21.3% is super!

Links

1 problem here! Please fix!

References

As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article (I can't verify the books, so I trust you with this!)
No dead links! Good job!

Outcome

On hold for 7 days! Great job, Cartoon network freak (talk) 18:27, 10 June 2017 (UTC) Hey Cartoon network freak, I believe I've fixed all the issues you brought up. Just a couple things, I didn't understood what you meant by "specify that these are her singles". I assumed you meant to mention that both songs were released as singles from the album so I added that. Is the alt fine? I hard trouble coming up with a proper description so I did the best I could with it. And I agree with removing the personnel section. The only reason I made it a section is because I was hoping I could find the album booklet online, as I do not actually own it, and spot more personnels. But I couldn't find it so that's why I agree with your statement. Thanks for the review Cartoon network freak. If you ever need a Latin song article reviewed for GA, just let me know! Thanks again! Erick (talk) 20:13, 10 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

- Gladly passing this! Great job and congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:50, 10 June 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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