Talk:The Carpet/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 23:03, 4 October 2012 (UTC)
Comments
- In the infobox, "The Office" should be in italics
- Where are production codes and running times referenced?
- Unlink television series per WP:OVERLINK
- "twentieth" should be "20th", as per WP:MOSNUM
- "In this episode, In this episode," hum...
- "a disgusting" I don't think that represents a neutral point of view, as a requirement of the GA criteria. Could that be changed, as in your opinion, it is "disgusting"
- "first and only" shouldn't episode be added after that
- "In its" in should be upon
- "For a time," well, when then?
- Are there any images of people related, perhaps?
- Unlink American per WP:OVERLINK in cultural references
- "an American reality television" actually, unlink reality television there, as its first link is above, also in cultural references, thus a WP:OVERLINK violation
- "NBC" should be written out fully as "the National Broadcasting Company (NBC)" on first mention, per MOS:ACRO
- Link Television Without Pity per WP:UNDERLINK
- "The episode was viewed by 8.6 million viewers.[9] The episode", that changed be changed to something else, the second part, two of "the episode"'s sentence before sentence doesn't seem right
- "Furthermore, the episode was particularly popular with fans of the series, particularly college students" reference?
- Double quotes (") should be single quotes (') in reference titles in this article, as per WP:MOS
- Link NBC in all reference titles
- Link NBC.com in external links
- Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order
Overall; good work. On hold for now. TBrandley 23:32, 21 October 2012 (UTC)