Talk:TNA Knockouts World Championship/GA1
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GA Review[edit]
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Reviewer: Wizardman 20:48, 13 November 2009 (UTC) Overall this is a nice article, I just have a couple fixes:
- "TNA's first women's accomplished was announced at TNA's first weekly pay-per-view event on June 19, 2002" I think it's missing a word; what was accomplished or announced?
- "The TNA Knockout of the Year is another award in TNA given to the knockout you achieved the most or had the best run that year." No second-person usage (you).
- "Due to Deaner pinning Sky to win the match, he felt he was the rightful champion in the storyline even though ODB was declared the winner of the title." So Deaner thought he should be the women's champion? Just want to make sure I have that right.
I'll put this on hold and pass when the issues are fixed, ideally in a few days. Wizardman 20:48, 13 November 2009 (UTC)