Talk:Roosevelt Jones
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:28, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead[edit]
- NBA Gatorade League should be just NBA G League
- Wikilink college basketball, Rivals.com
- Rebounds should be linked to Rebound (basketball)
- "and committed to Butler." - and committed to playing for Buller
Early life[edit]
- "he couldn't get his shot off " - could not; try to avoid quotations outside of quotes
- "In eight grade," - eighth
- "leader on a 14-15 team." - 14–15 team; also an en dash should be used in place for an hyphen for all respective game scores after this one
- Wikilink Southeastern Conference to Southwestern Athletic Conference and Rivals to Rivals.com
- "but he didn't notice Jones's poor shooting style due to his athleticism." - did not
College career[edit]
- "Jones tallied a season-high 17 points to go with 10 rebounds." - remove "to go"
- "Jones averaged 7.8 points and a team high" - team-high
- Link layup
- "Jones had 23 points in Butler's 67-64 loss to Notre Dame in the NCAA Tournament despite" - wikilink NCAA Tournament to 2015 NCAA Division I Men's Basketball Tournament
- "and rarely shooting outside 15 feet." - use the convert template on 15 feet
- "he hit a last-second shot to defeat 17th ranked Cincinnati ater" - after
- Wikilink Blowout to Blowout (sports)
- "Jones earned a bachelor of arts degrees" - remove "a"
Reference[edit]
- Ref 24 is dead and requires archiving
- Refs 30 and 34 are lacking the author
That's all the nibbles I found. Going to be putting this review on hold. MWright96 (talk) 18:06, 8 June 2018 (UTC)
- @Editorofthewiki: Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 06:48, 9 June 2018 (UTC)
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