Talk:Roger Peckinpaugh/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 01:35, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I will begin this review soon.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:35, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Great. When I get a chance, I'll do some more research. Your GA reviews are among the most thorough I've seen. – Muboshgu (talk) 19:45, 19 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

At times the Bisons have been the minor league affiliate for the Indians. Were they the minor league affiliate for them at the times at issue here?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:53, 20 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I think the WP:LEAD should link to the specific world series teams (19YY team season), piped of course.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 21:56, 20 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Professional career

Why Naps in prose but not infobox?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
"making him the youngest manager in MLB history" at what age? Is there a list article to link to?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Is it possible to present some encyclopedic content for each season that he played?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

We need a personal section

Was he ever married?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Kids?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Siblings?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]
Did he have a known mother?--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 06:07, 22 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

All images need {{personality rights}}--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 00:53, 23 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]

I am FAILing this article due to lack of breadth. When I look at Baseball-reference I can see he has led the league a few times in reasonable important stats and had a bunch of top ten finishes. Even just adding statistical accomplishments would beef up the article. Furthermore, there is no indication that a media search was attempted. He played for the Yankees at a time when NYC had a half dozen newspapers. Anyone who lives in New York State or the tri-state area around NYC should be able to find some interesting stories about him from the NY Times. There are too many seasons during which he was an active player that had no commentary in the article.--TonyTheTiger (T/C/BIO/WP:CHICAGO/WP:FOUR) 01:01, 23 May 2012 (UTC)[reply]