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For the record... ---Another Believer (Talk) 22:53, 6 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

@Emilybrosious: Please refrain from adding unsourced content to this Wikipedia article. Thanks, ---Another Believer (Talk) 15:05, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Also adding POV content. Just pulling from one diff of many: if you re-read this you'll see some phrases that are essentially soapboxing for the subject.
  • covered the burgeoning industry [why not do your homework and put a dollar value on it instead of slapping an adjective?]
  • interviews with America's top entrepreneurs [who says they are top?]
  • continues to write for top publications [again]
  • the biggest independent music festival in the Rocky Mountain region [fine if RS says so, but unsourced]
  • after 15 years at the award-winning newspaper [many newspapers win awards, and why is this relevant to this person?]
  • leading businesses and individuals [again, who says leading?]
  • Grasslands team manages the public presence of brands and individuals in the legal cannabis space, and ensures businesses and leaders are seen [just wow. is this their "about us" page?]
This kind of writing seems to be hard for people with PR backgrounds to stay away from. We don't need it here. ☆ Bri (talk) 16:40, 10 October 2017 (UTC)[reply]