Talk:Reputation (album)/GA1

GA Review

Passed. Cherrell410^{(t · c)} 04:11, 11 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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Reviewer: Cherrell410 (talk · contribs) 17:09, 4 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, thanks for reviewing this article. I’d get back to you within 2 days’ time! Cheers, Ippantekina (talk) 11:24, 8 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Cherrell410, I have addressed your comments accordingly, except the "Live performances" heading because the section also discusses press/media interviews. Ippantekina (talk) 04:03, 11 July 2023 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a. (reference section):

b. (citations to reliable sources):

c. (OR):

d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a. (major aspects):

b. (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:

Many disputes about what the title should be, one of the main editors seems to have an edit warring issue, 15 reverts since may 12
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/fail:

Leaving my suggestions for improvement below:

Background: comma after worldwide
Background: into a fixation onto which - is there a better way to write this?
Background: (i made that bitch famous was particulary contriversal) - that's an opinion. it might be a popular opinion, but its an opinion.
Background: once-reputation --> once–reputation
Recording and conception: Three musicians co-wrote and co-produced select tracks with Martin and Shellback, including... --> Additionally, Ali Payami, Oscar gorres and Oscar holter co-wrote ready for it, so it goes, and dancing with our hands tied, respectively.
Musical styles: wikilink distorted to distortion (music)
Themes and lyrics: it references alcohol and sex more than any of swifts previous records; for instance... - don't give the example, as you are only giving the example for the alcohol part of this phrase
Performances --> Live performances
Performances: The show recorded at AT&T Stadium in Arlington, Texas --> The show at AT&T Stadium in Arlington, Texas was recorded and released as a...

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