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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

I will get on with this right away! --K. Peake 09:02, 6 November 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • Add a comma after debut studio album
  • Shouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency with the infobox?
  • Mention that it was the fourth single from the album
  • Can't you add anything to the lead about the lyrics of the song?
  • "was met with mixed to positive responses" → "received mixed to positive responses"
  • Shouldn't both certifications use either by or from for consistency?
  • Simply change to premiered rather than bothering to mention it was uploaded to the YouTube channel in the lead
  • Maybe add a mention of critical commentary about Ora's fashion?

Background and composition

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  • Again, shouldn't the order be "written and produced" for consistency?
  • The second and third sentences should be merged, also the release year of Ora is not needed in the body
  • Why does it say multiple remixes including then list out all of the ones in the sources?
  • Lowercase the Flexican per MOS:THEMUSIC
  • ""Radioactive" is a" → "Musically, "Radioactive" is a"
  • Should electro be piped to Electro (music) instead, possibly?
  • To elaborate on my previous comment, are there not any sources discussing the lyrics?

Reception

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  • Fix spelling of Rihanna using [] to insert her name in the quote
  • Resolve MOS:QUOTE issues throughout this section
  • "As Ora's sixth charting single in the United Kingdom," → "As Ora's sixth charting single in the UK,"
  • Mention that the 200,000 units were sold in the UK

Music video

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  • Remove "for "Radioactive"" after accompanying music video
  • "sits in a floating chair" → "spins in a floating chair" per the source
  • [24][28] being invoked in two consecutive sentences is WP:OVERCITE, so only invoke these two after the last one of those and the sentence two later
  • "we are used to."" → "we are used to"." per MOS:QUOTE
  • "used in the video" → "used in the video were"

Track listing

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  • Good

Charts

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  • Good

Certifications

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  • Good

Release history

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  • Format → Format(s)
  • Label → Label(s)

References

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Final comments and verdict

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