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"Cherry became a complete all-rounder." This sentence kind of sits uncomfortably in the middle of the paragraph. Firstly, it is a judgement that sounds a little POV. Secondly, it sounds a lot like an unattributed quote. Either put it in quote marks and attribute it, remove it, or put a colon after it to link it to the following clause.
"Cherry agreed and the German died" - sounds a little like the German died because Cherry agreed, which I don't think is the case, maybe add "shortly afterward" on the end of the sentence.
The external links might be better presented in reference format, as if they were web-references, including publisher and last access dates.
I havn't seen any other external links section presented in such a style, so I have left them the way they are at the moment. However, the links do include the site's publishers already, but not the access dates. Thanks, Abraham, B.S. (talk) 04:23, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
Its not essential, I was just thinking that the same reasons that internet references are presented in inline citations apply to external links as well and thus it makes sense to treat them in the same way, but I leave it in your hands.--Jackyd101 (talk) 16:53, 19 September 2008 (UTC)[reply]
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