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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:39, 22 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]

  • "who praised for its" → "who praised it for its"
  • #Plot is 296 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
  • "Olaf and Sven decides" → "Olaf and Sven decide"
  • Add a serial comma between "Christmas, Hanukkah and Winter solstice".
  • "a television special, to be aired on ABC, produced by Roy Conli, and directed by Kevin Deters and Stevie Wermers" – reword
  • "limited time theatrical release" → "limited theatrical release"
  • "the story follows Olaf as he tries to find the best holiday traditions for Anna, Elsa, and Kristoff" — is a summary needed?
  • [8][9][10][11] – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
  • Resolve the "[better source needed]" tag.
  • Add a hyphen between "limited time" in #Release.
  • Remove the links to Pixar and Coco in #Release (WP:OVERLINK).
  • "apologies, and removed the short from exhibition" → "apologies and removed the short from the exhibition"
  • "It was viewed 5.64 million times." → "It was viewed by an estimated 5.64 million people in the United States."
  • The Rotten Tomatoes score is wrong (actually 7 reviews, not 10; 5.1 average, not 5.12).
  • "betteroff" → "better off"
  • "contributions on the project" → "contributions to the project"
  • "incoperated" → "incorporated"
  • "as Tesco-exclusive" → "as a Tesco-exclusive"
  • "the United Kingdom December 7, 2017" → "the United Kingdom on December 7, 2017"
  • Metro has been found to be an unreliable source.
  • Update the British Board of Film Classification link.
  • Sources are archived.
  • #12 should be properly cited.
  • Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
  • Is LaughingPlace reliable?
  • Those are my notes. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:23, 22 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]
    @Some Dude From North Carolina:,  Done. Wingwatchers (talk) 21:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)[reply]