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Wiki Education assignment: Technology and Culture

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This article is currently the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 19 August 2024 and 7 December 2024. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Dardarman1, Jain697, Owenmei (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Akshithio, Gholzwar06.

— Assignment last updated by Ybapat (talk) 02:42, 22 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Edit review

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Hello! I just reviewed your article on Neuralink and found it informative but think it could benefit from some improvements. Consider adding more scholarly sources and subdividing the sections for clarity. Also, including player impact examples could enhance its depth. Check the lead for better organization, and maybe add some visuals to illustrate the data. Great job overall! Looking forward to your revisions!~~~~ Gholzwar06 (talk) 02:04, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]

What does "player impact examples" mean in this context? For your other feedback, do you have any concrete examples of changes you think are needed? JaggedHamster (talk) 07:30, 21 October 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made in a new section. A summary of the conclusions reached follows.
The result of this discussion was merge. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 21:19, 23 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

This article is not really about an individual pig, but a demonstration of Neuralink's technology that happened to use multiple pigs. The subject does not have notability distinct from Neuralink itself. Jonathan Deamer (talk) 19:08, 14 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Second. Everything from that Musk pig article can be summarized within a couple of paragraphs. QRep2020 (talk) 19:11, 15 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.